Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world,
particularly in their contribution to global warming. What can be done to reduce
the dangers of global warming?
It is true, that for the last century issue of climate changes has become really dangerous, more over has influenced all the people and nature around the world. So, let us discuss the problem and try to offer come things for reduse the issue.
In my opinion, one of the common reasones of groving up this problem there are not acceptance the global warming as a really huge and destroyible issue mostle reach and modern countries such us China and the USA. While this countries produce common part of air pollution becouse of their heavy industry and agriculture.
However, there are some ways for solving and decreasing the issue. Firstly, really necessary to reduse amount of carbon dioxide emission, to improve and rebuild some of the old and not modern factories. in places where it possible need to build carbon capture and storage plants. Second stage there are try to stop deforestation around the world, in addition to plant yang forests and maintain the oldone. Third stage, I guess, necessary to do same changes in agricultural sector such us to reduse amount of beef prodaction, becouse it couse of 80% pollution of methan, and try to breed another types of animals for example chickens. Fourth stage, really need to use mass media and spread the information about global warming for wide society.
In concludion, the problem of climate changes on planet Earth has reached to far, but I really beleive if all the people will start to use some of this things for solving the issue, the planet will be in safe for next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, so, third, while, for example, i guess, in addition, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84528301887 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42191254536 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569811320755 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5848637137 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.727272727 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981094287122 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036227593226 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384983193911 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622211751742 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391354534828 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.