Essay topics:
Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, Infrastructure development and rapid grown of supermarkets creating unsustainable competitions among the local business and it is sometimes thought that shutting local business will obliterate local communities. In my opinion, though today's supermarkets trend is impacting local business, it will not lead to death of local communities.
Votes
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 41.998997996 12% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 305.0 1615.20841683 19% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 48.0 315.596192385 15% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35416666667 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.6321480259 4.20363070211 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51923040435 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 36.0 176.041082164 20% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 92.7 506.74238477 18% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398733599855 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.307970841429 0.084324248473 365% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563078891161 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.398733599855 0.151304729494 264% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.85 12.4159519038 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.