Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The increasing rate of crime is a topic of serious concern these days. There are several reasons for the same and also some measures can be taken to overcome this problem.
One of the primary reason of this is unemployment. As the number of jobs available are not adequate to provide employment to the vast population, people resort to burglary and robbery to make ends meet. To control the above situation, more jobs should be created to increase the earning capacity of people.
Another area of malfunction is unequal distribution of wealth. many people in India are below the poverty line. This hand to mouth situation is a precursor to criminal activities. In addition, natural calamities worsen the situation. The poor people in these rural areas who are hit by a disaster turn out to be criminals in future. In this case, government should take measures to improve their standard of living. However, psychological resistance of some people to depend on government and their subsidies also leads to crime.
Moreover, offenders during their imprisonment are confined to the four walls of jail. Nothing is being done to help them improve their skills. Apparently, they serve their punishment just killing their time and mingling with co-offenders. Here government should come into action. These prisoners should be imparted with some knowledge and positive outlook which will assist them in finding job for themselves once they are released.
To recapitulate, the aforementioned measures can work for creating noble citizens thereby making this world a better and safer place to live in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, look, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22093023256 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77384283518 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635658914729 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4919475305 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116642657102 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352486169233 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343090649207 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666776417283 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316776512952 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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