Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
It has been observed, over a period of time, that only a handful of individuals are able to give their time to hobbies and interests. This essay will be discussing the reasons or causes of this declining trend and lay some light on the possible outcomes.
To start with, life is cities has become very busy and fast. Be it an office goes, business man or a school going kid. Each one of them devote most of their time to their work or studies. Working professionals are mostly occupied in work and they spend 8-12 hours a day, or even more, in their office. To add to that, 1-2 hours per day must be spent to travel from home to work and vice versa. Businessmen are no different than a working professional. As far as children or teenagers are concerned, they spend nearly 8-10 hours in school. Other than that, they must also find time for homework, tuition, assignments and what not. For everyone, it is getting near to impossible to find a place for their hobbies in their tight schedule. Secondly, with the advent of online social network and internet, people's priorities have changed. Earlier, almost everyone used to indulge themselves in some physical activity or sports and pursue them as a hobby. Nowadays, it has become less fashionable to do so. People prefer to play the same games on their smart phones or gaming consoles. There is hardly anyone seen in the playground. Moreover, people prefer to spend time with themselves or even alone sometimes. Naturally so, because after a long working week, one looks forward to weekends to relax, rejuvenate and recharge themselves for the upcoming days.
But, these causes/problems will have a detrimental effect on people and on the society as a whole. As more and more people start to stay busy, they have started to develop long term physical as well as mental disorders. A recent study conducted by the Center of Disease Control, USA, states that if people keep repelling away from their interests at this rate then by the year 2035, the world will see obesity and depression becoming a famine. This will lead to unhealthy upcoming generations. Moreover, the society on the whole will start to disintegrate and as Dr. Stephen Hawking says "Mankind will live for only 100 more years" will cease to be known as a mere theory.
In conclusion, before our near and dear ones start to face its negative impact, we must go back to our roots and pick up the missing pieces. Its never too late to start practicing what you loved once.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
It has been observed, over a period of time, that only a handful of individuals are...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...ice versa. Businessmen are no different than a working professional. As far as child...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...r roots and pick up the missing pieces. Its never too late to start practicing what...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the whole, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74311926606 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56419146231 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589449541284 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0029952445 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.72 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.44 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172385958787 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416320632721 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042878821519 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103781948458 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563059551345 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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