First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing the position. To what extent do you agree?
In this ever changing materialistic and demanding world, our attitude and behaviour changes according to the person present in front of us. In this competitive age, everybody tries to make an everlasting first impression. Even though we may not agree to it, as a society we have become more judgemental and perceive our thoughts based solely on the person’s appearance. To say first impression is the last impression would perhaps be an exaggeration because one can correct their mistake. However, one will have to make a lot of effort to correct their fault, so why not try your best and create a positive first impression when going for a job interview rather than relying on other factors to get you over the line.
When going for a job interview, the person conducting the interview has numerous candidates in front of him/her all matching the eligibility criteria of that particular vacancy. During the interview, I will be at my most presentable and because of the fact that, I am in dire need of that particular post, I will create the best possible first impression. My appearance and body language will make me stand apart from other candidates. Numerous surveys have shown that people who take care about their looks and try to make a positive first impression are more successful in life. In professional life, a good first impression can open doors to many other possibilities. In the words of Andrew Grant “You never get a second choice to make a first Impression” so one should always try their best.
In the end, I would like to say that even though mistakes can be rectified, but not everyone gets a second chance in life. Life is unpredictable and we should be at our best at the first instance as if you may not be, you will have to work very hard till the next opportunity comes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...w, I will be at my most presentable and because of the fact that, I am in dire need of that particular p...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...so one should always try their best. In the end, I would like to say that even ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79047619048 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83777562918 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549206349206 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7780832189 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134895696821 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05050248657 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335174507852 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934829550699 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313732390931 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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