Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world Today however growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond

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Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?

Potable water shortage in some areas of the world has been an issue since ancient times However, in today's world, water scarcity is aggravated due to lack of water supply to the growing global demand. In this essay, I will discuss what the causes of this problem are, and give possible solutions to tackle this issue.
First, although the world’s population currently experiencing rapid growth, nonetheless the further problem of fresh water demand is might be solved. Often people are poorly acknowledged about smart water usage. For example, in urban areas people use water a lot for cleansing purpose such as spending lots of time in washroom, which in turn results in the significant amount of water has been wasted for the basic purpose; meanwhile this waste could found a better appliance if not lack of proper water control by individuals. To not this happen, government must enact the water usage rules on media. Thus, majority of people will refrain themselves from this wrong way of water wastage.
Second, if we start simply be more concerned about the clean state of surrounding us environment, then this possibly can help us to prevent the fresh water from being spoiled. Public can also contribute towards conserving water. They should refrain from performing activities that will pollute natural fresh water reserves. Hence preserving the natural environment in clean condition is an essential factor which positively contributes to fresh water distribution.
In conclusion, it can be confidently conveyed that, even though human population is growing at a rapid rate, nevertheless the measures such as active education on correct water usage via media or other means of delivery information, as well as making people to realize that saving water resources, and less polluting environment measures should be taken into their consideration. Taken into account stated above statements, it can be said that this all is a best way to safe our future fresh water reserves.

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Average: 9.5 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Hence,
... pollute natural fresh water reserves. Hence preserving the natural environment in c...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ements, it can be said that this all is a best way to safe our future fresh water...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.228125 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7109712714 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628125 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.2861062007 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.692307692 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253787017364 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888911261817 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063524487868 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165993876605 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103844927104 0.056905535591 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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