Government investment in art such as music and theater is a waste of money. The government should invest this money in public services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the keen interest to motivate the artistic talents of the country, the government is spending more on music and theater rather than on public services. But I think, more amount should be spent on improving the nation's conditions for its citizens in the form of public service.
There are various benefits of investing money into the betterment of the people. Firstly, as we know, that the economic growth of a nation is directly proportional to the health index of its citizens. The more the government will invest in public services, the better it will be for the development of the country. The government should invest more into education and creating employment opportunities for its people. It should focus on providing better living standards to increase the happiness and satisfaction quotient in its citizens.
Moreover, as tax payers, it is ultimate that people expect their government to spend more on improving the lifestyle and providing basic amenities. It is the duty of the government to fulfill the requirements of its citizens. It should give better infrastructure and services which will in return earn nation's trust in its government.
On the other hand, the government investment in arts and music seem to be a waste of money as creative and imaginative skills are inborn in a person. it is difficult to induce them in an individual. Furthermore, in a developing country like India, where many people are struggling to get a livelihood for them and their families, no one shows much interest in arts music and theater.
In the end, I would like to conclude that it will be better if the government make more investments in public sectors rather than wasting money on arts, music and theater.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0243902439 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86193190887 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498257839721 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6503055643 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315559460033 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11359362419 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957344836963 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188705280386 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661843403074 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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