Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that.
Do you agree with this opinion?
The shown statement reckons that because people should take responsibility for their own health government is not supposed to offer free health care for the citizens. This view is excruciatingly wrongheaded, I am strongly against it.
To begin with, there are various factors that affect the health of the person that is fiercely biased to accuse individuals of their health issues. Environmental problems, for instance, are harmful to personal health. A real-life instance is the gas leakage from the laboratory of Wuhan which led to the Corona Virus-19. In this case, it is the government who should be held accountable for the health of citizens rather than individuals. How could the government walk away from the responsibility to offer health care for the victims?
Furthermore, the fast development of capitalism, as well as corporate lobbyists meddling in legislation, has significantly reshaped the health, medicine and insurance industry, which unfortunately makes it incredibly expensive for the working class to access affordable health care. In fact, the health insurance company commonly abuse their information advantage over devastating patients, which usually them extra financial pressure to get reasonable insurance coverage. An outrageous example is a hedge fund manager purchased the patent of any effective Cancer medicine to raise the price from 100Rs. to 1000Rs., in order to make a fortune out of the suffering of patients. Therefore, the government as a lawmaker plays a crucial role in curb the greed of corporations.
Not to mention the basic role of government is to serve the wellbeing of its people regardless of their social classes. It is defiantly irresponsible for the government to avoid taking care of public health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...medicine to raise the price from 100Rs. to 1000Rs., in order to make a fortune out...
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Line 3, column 773, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...role in curb the greed of corporations. Not to mention the basic role of governm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4197080292 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09415231866 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7705672556 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.230769231 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355657660707 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123326747929 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109475533994 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217424439455 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10928789005 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.