Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for poorer nations. However the governments of richer nations should take more resposibility for helping poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Healthcare, education and trade are most important parts of any country. There are country of third world, which can’t develop these branches due economical unrest and instability. For the last two decades, the gap between poor and rich nations has significantly increased. Poor countries need help from more developed countries to overcome their obstacles. And I beleive that richer nations should make step forwards for giving an aid to indigent countries.
There are lots of possible ways for nations to help each other. Thus a lot of places in Africa containes low developed territories which struggling with poverty, hunger and spreading deceases. Such probleproms were caused by different factors, such as ineducated or corrupted government. Annually, such countries as USA, Great Britain, Germany send medical aid to protect inhabitants from illness. There is also educational program in Australia, which allows children from third world countries to start studying in some educational facilities for free. Such program will help to provide poor nations with good specialists, wich will able increase economical position of their native country.
Besides, there very effective way to give an aid to a poor country. The rich country can orginize trade relationship to allow poor country export different goods for other countries. Thus, Ukraine buys lots of lemons and oranges from Africa. Ukraine can’t raise these fruits due climate factor, however there is excessional number of lemons and oraged is growing there.
On the other hand, each nation should try to maintain their own branches without foreing countries’ help. Governments need to understand that every country has its own problems and it can’t help every time with this. So, generally, we should rely upon ourselves.
In conclusion, improvments in healcare, educational and trade systems are indespensable for poor nations and rich countries should give help them in order to create a good relationships and allow other countries to get through hard times.
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...er countries to get through hard times.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'third', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269754768392 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.147138964578 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.130790190736 0.0946595960268 138% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0299727520436 0.0501214627716 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0245231607629 0.0437548338989 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0980926430518 0.122226691241 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0217983651226 0.0403226058552 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81081308415 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0354223433243 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0517711171662 0.0861772015684 60% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0272479564033 0.021408717616 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108991825613 0.011925033212 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2062.0 1933.35771543 107% => OK
No of words: 315.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.54603174603 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.415873015873 0.374742101984 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.336507936508 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24126984127 0.203846283523 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.171428571429 0.137316102897 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81081308415 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 67.617089415 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5789473684 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7369717395 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.526315789 127.492653851 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.526315789474 0.814263465372 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 50.2297410192 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.93243243243 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288716256237 0.332605444948 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0768893912455 0.102741220458 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0603569976844 0.0668466124924 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.460197864521 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155252408435 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951995105406 0.134430193775 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652391183874 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.201636536233 0.324371583561 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0518969898163 0.0638462369009 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179047625228 0.228012699653 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760828835617 0.058150111329 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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