Internet social media have become very popular. To what extent do you think this is a good or bad thing? Why do you think this is the case?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, cyber social networking is used by each and every one. While some people see it as a positive development, their opponents are in disagreement. As for me, Internet social media has more benefits than drawbacks, so I am strongly supportive of the former above point of view. Let me explain my position, and the reasons for the argument followed.
First, social media are an integral part of modern life. It seems to be impossible to live without Facebook, WhatsApp, Instagram or Snapchat, and this is the case especially for young people. With such a high-speed life, using social networking becomes an extremely convenient way to stay in touch with others, make new contacts, share experiences and information. Moreover, with the help of such technologies, some new professions, like a Social Network Specialist, Specialist of Marketing on Facebook, etc., have appeared and allowed many people to have a job without leaving their homes. Therefore, social media are highly beneficial to society.
On the other hand, people who continuously use social media might become addicted to them. Instead of real-live communication, many people, especially teenagers, spend hours just staring at the screens and looking at pictures of others. Also, they expect to receive a comment, a message or a 'thumb up' on their posts. Such desire happens because receiving positive feedback from someone makes a person feel happy, the same way as it happens from taking drugs. Scientists claim that every third school child is addicted to their social accounts and spends at least 10 hours a day, sending and receiving messages. It affects their education and causes health problems. Unfortunately, this issue is a significant drawback of cybersocial media.
To conclude, Internet social media should be considered as a positive development. Despite the risk of addiction, social network platforms benefit people by building their connections, transferring information, and opening new professional opportunities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...ays, cyber social networking is used by each and every one. While some people see it as a positive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, third, while, as for, at least, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44408945687 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9838032085 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645367412141 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2979755729 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131690741572 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428421339786 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314903540386 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787688542305 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188023387002 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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