The Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Some people believe that internet access creates problems. There are several possible reasons why it can happen.
Firstly, some data may be unverifiable. For example, every time they search for a data, there would be lots of choices that would appear on the screen. They would not be sure if the information they are reading is accurate. Some sources may even have outdated information. Secondly, some sites may be unreliable. For instance, people sign up on one site that sells goods online. The goods would be paid for by a credit card, but the purchaser would not receive anything. And finally, not everything is available through the net. When my friend had tried to research for some pictures of 18th century paintings, he did not find any results. Then he was told by his teacher that they would only be available in the library.
Others believe that the Internet is very useful and these are the justifications. Firstly, it is hard to get the same data, that is available through the Internet by other means. For example, if the directory information could not give me the accurate address and contact number of a place I want to visit, I normally check that information on the Internet. In just one click, I would get all the details of that certain company. Secondly, research becomes more comprehensive. For instance, I do not have to buy lots of reading materials to complete my research. Most of the needed information can be found if I have Internet access. And finally, data is easily compared and contrasted. I remember, my cousin researched a study about overweight children a decade ago and at present. He was able to finish his research in just one day, as compared to a week if he would not use the Internet.
In conclusion, let me reiterate that the Internet plays a big role in our life, because it makes data retrieval and comparison easier.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215258855586 0.247107183377 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.1689373297 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0653950953678 0.0946595960268 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0572207084469 0.0501214627716 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0681198910082 0.0437548338989 156% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103542234332 0.122226691241 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0299727520436 0.0403226058552 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69644121564 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0190735694823 0.0326793684256 58% => OK
Particles: 0.00272479564033 0.00163938923432 166% => OK
Determiners: 0.0926430517711 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0381471389646 0.021408717616 178% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0136239782016 0.011925033212 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1871.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 324.0 316.048096192 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77469135802 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324074074074 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268518518519 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191358024691 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108024691358 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69644121564 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54012345679 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 57.0937138528 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0891783567 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0869565217 20.7743622355 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6469920047 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.347826087 127.492653851 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0869565217 20.7743622355 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.608695652174 0.814263465372 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 40.9388083736 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.18518518519 1.69124875643 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173696153464 0.332605444948 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0858515387993 0.102741220458 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0741291590257 0.0668466124924 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.41430555792 0.534860350844 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187431677222 0.148594505496 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562464474463 0.134430193775 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484384501882 0.0742795772207 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.240403127193 0.324371583561 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.143162686412 0.0638462369009 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925330278842 0.228012699653 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733646998082 0.058150111329 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.41683366733 322% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.