Inventors are not as important to society as doctors.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
To begin with, nowadays, it is believed that medical workers play a vital role in modern society. General public is confident that they support sick people in their numerous health problems. Nevertheless, there is a great majority of humans who have another opinion, in particular, scientists are in charge of future generation’s health because of their supernovas invents. I tend to partly agree with these thoughts, therefore, the purpose of this essay is to discuss both points of view.
Those in favour of the idea that doctors provide essential support to patients, present a plenty of reasons to justify their viewpoint. Mainly, physicians can help diagnose some diseases in order to prescribe appropriate treatment and to speed up their recovery. To illustrate this point, recently, inhabitants of most territories of Africa have suffered from the Ebola virus. It appears in the form of a dangerous illness and leads to death. However, due to early diagnosis, doctors have managed to stop the spread of it.
However, one should not ignore that scientists, perhaps, can invent some preparations which may save the mankind from some diseases next years. It seems to me, it is not less significant profession to be an inventor, because they may try to find new drugs for various sicknesses. For instance, these days, the new Zika Virus has been spreading all over the World. According to some statistics, children from infected mothers can be born with problems of their brain. That is why, some inventions of medical branch can avoid of the expanding of this Virus.
In conclusion, both ideas examined in the essay are quite significant, obviously. Apparently, while health workers are responsible for seriously ill people, the research projects on health care in medical industry should be developed in order to prevent a number of diseases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... have managed to stop the spread of it. However, one should not ignore that sci...
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...tions of medical branch can avoid of the expanding of this Virus. In conclusio...
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Discourse Markers used:
['apparently', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in particular', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248554913295 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.14450867052 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0722543352601 0.0946595960268 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0433526011561 0.0501214627716 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0404624277457 0.0437548338989 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130057803468 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0260115606936 0.0403226058552 65% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82351239102 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0462427745665 0.0326793684256 142% => OK
Particles: 0.0028901734104 0.00163938923432 176% => OK
Determiners: 0.0953757225434 0.0861772015684 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0231213872832 0.021408717616 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0115606936416 0.011925033212 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1864.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21333333333 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.403333333333 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306666666667 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213333333333 0.203846283523 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146666666667 0.137316102897 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82351239102 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 72.4278046493 60.7387585426 119% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.75 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1994798823 49.517814964 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 49.4166666667 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.77215189873 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177678129485 0.332605444948 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0908775789911 0.102741220458 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0445300454754 0.0668466124924 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.527215301348 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11335816347 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766428231784 0.134430193775 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565360766893 0.0742795772207 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.292348521534 0.324371583561 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106646991651 0.0638462369009 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118760081757 0.228012699653 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039980531395 0.058150111329 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.