It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience.
In traditional China, there was an old adage saying that family must be formed prior to establishment of nation. Although the old Chinese wisdom had already emphasized how family is important to nation, people's attitude toward family has changed in modern society. The importance of family seems to be faded out. In this essay, we will discuss root causes to the problem along with some possible solutions.
The major reason can be explained in term of both technological and economic factors. Firstly, due to rapid development of technology, peoples nowadays spend too much time playing new gadgets like iphone and tablet whereas less time use on family members. Certainly, it will have adverse effect on keeping family bond. Another reason comes from the competitive economic environment. Longer working hour is inevitably needed for parent in keeping their occupation. Estrangement among family members is hence unavoidable as proportionately less time spend on family members. From above point of views, the alienation seems to be unsavory fact and therefore we need to address them accordingly.
To address the issue, we can make used of the technology itself. The big internet company should invest more effort on keeping people's relationship. For example, the features like video call are prevalent in many new gadgets. Parent should make used of it as a new communication bridge to their children. Besides, government should also advocate work life balance and prompt it to all companies so that breadwinners can allocate reasonable time between work and family members.
Family relationship is endowed to everyone and cannot be removed. Every individual should cherish and protect this intrinsic relationship and on no account give it up. As mentioned in the introduction, family is the basic unit of our nation. Keeping health family ties is vitally important to the prosperity of our nation.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'besides', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278443113772 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.158682634731 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0928143712575 0.0946595960268 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0389221556886 0.0501214627716 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0389221556886 0.0437548338989 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122754491018 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0538922155689 0.0403226058552 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84614158238 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0359281437126 0.0326793684256 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0059880239521 0.00163938923432 365% => OK
Determiners: 0.0718562874251 0.0861772015684 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0329341317365 0.021408717616 154% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00299401197605 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1911.0 1933.35771543 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.32781456954 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.44701986755 0.374742101984 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311258278146 0.28420135186 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198675496689 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12582781457 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84614158238 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619205298013 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 70.8488360502 60.7387585426 117% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4947822141 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.55 127.492653851 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.814263465372 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 46.2258278146 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.92405063291 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164027517418 0.332605444948 49% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0802847382086 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0834433204655 0.0668466124924 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.438377371503 0.534860350844 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107069916101 0.148594505496 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608514856852 0.134430193775 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353860328478 0.0742795772207 48% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290636571178 0.324371583561 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.019448190092 0.0638462369009 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117184095534 0.228012699653 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162324830531 0.058150111329 28% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.41683366733 293% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 1.9629258517 408% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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