It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people are blessed to have inborn talents in Sports or music or recital skills while others develop their knowledge in recreational and musical areas as they grow. Recent research from World Recreational Society shows that almost 60% talents are inherited from their parents. This proves as an evidence that inborn talents should be well nurtured by the parents to utilize the skillset either on Sports or recreation. In this essay we will compare and contrast both the views and elucidate my opinion.
It is an undeniable fact that some people possess talents when they are born. They have peculiar skillset in the fields like Sports and music. Nearly 10% of the babies across globe are good at music and imitate songs and dance even when they are a toddler. We can see proofs in the form of video in some Youtube Channels. Additionally, the notable sportsman Sunil Gavaskar started watching the cricket at the age of 1. This serves as a proof that some people are blessed to have talents from their mother’s womb.
On the other hand, it is inevitable that people can become a great sport person or musician only when they are educated. With proper guidance and support, anyone can reach their goal. While default talent supports the success, the regular practice and guidance is the key for achieving success. Approximately 70% of the successful Gold medalist in Olympics spent the half of their life time in practice. This stragety precursors for their victory.
To sum up, even though few people have certain talents the success comes to those who do regular practice. It is not bounded only for Sports or music, but also applicable for people in other fields. Hence I think any child can become successful person in the field of sports or music or arts when he/she spend quality time in practicing the skills. It is my hope that many people will start working towards the betterment of their artistic talents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, i think, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3818649045 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7703100971 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8636363636 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467497725382 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128923325111 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154232542054 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316954424501 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.298854678729 0.056905535591 525% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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