I agree to the statement that travelling to other countries has become affordable. This can be seen as a positive development, since people from different parts of the world get to inter-mingle and know each other. There can be multiple factors attributing to this growth. But the major ones which I feel are competition from private airlines, increase in spending capacity, boring lifestyle and technological advances.
Firstly, the increase of private airlines in the aviation world has helped the cause of frequent and affordable travelling. Earlier, there used to only government drive airline bodies that use to operate for international travel. Now-a-days, the stiff competition and quality service from private counterparts has resulted in drop of airline tickets.
Secondly, today's generation are very well placed in their careers at a very early age of their life. People have affluent jobs and can afford to travel via air as compared to other means of travel which use water or land. The millennials of today are easy going and fun living people. They are ready to spend that extra to achieve happiness and contentment in life.
Thirdly, the mundane lifestyle have challenged people to do something different. The curiosity to explore new adventures has risen considerably and people are using travel to other countries as their favorite way to get out of the boring schedule.
Lastly, the technology has enabled people to retrieve information by just fiddling over their phones or personal devices. The readily availability of information has helped people to shed their inhibitions when it comes to international travel.
Conclusively, the prime advantage of travelling is that one gets to know about different cultures that are prevalent around the globe and further inculcates respect for other humans as well.
With the advent of technology
With the advent of technology it become much easier to travel from one country to another. I believe this positive development make human life much faster and comfortable. This essay will cover the reasons and my opinion.
At the outset, with the invention of aeroplane it become much easier to travel from one part of earth to any part of their earth. It will take only few hours to travel a long distance. This positive development will help human to save their time and energy. For example tourists who want to experience nature and environment of different parts of the earth can travel easily in few days. Besides this the prices of the flights are now very reasonable, So money is no bar to explore the whole world.
Furthermore, With the advancement in this sector a positive development can be see in education sector. For instance students who wants to study in foreign universities for their higher education can easily visit other country. In addition to this it is a boon for the business sector. Because it is very easy to cover a long distance in short duration. So, business will grow up and trading sector will get a new position. Traders can easily visit other nations for business meeting and annual summit.
To recapitulate, it can be conclude that fast and easy travelling in a affordable price completely change human life in a positive manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37716262976 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89302327981 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598615916955 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0021762716 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169850688879 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519450624099 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438185262774 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820433425842 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226683623863 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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