It has been observed that past generation is more cultured, disciplined and have mannerism towards their parents as compared to today's children which lack all these qualities. In the following paragraphs, I will explain its adverse effects on society and the potential reasons responsible for such behaviour.
To embark on, every culture has some values, ethics which are passed from generations to generations that enrich them and keep them alive. Unfortunately, it has been changed now. For instance- in previous times children used to touch the feet of elders, wish them, respect them, obeys their orders that can rarely be seen these days. Adoloscents do whatever they like which has bad impact on our society.
There are various contributing factors accountable for such behaviour of children. Firstly, in the past, offsprings spend abundant time with their grandparents, parents which inculcate moral values and ethics . But now, there is a drastic change . Today children are busy with mobile phones , gadgets and other technology and rarely spend time with their elder generation and lacks all these qualities. Secondly, parents show more love and affection towards their wards and never correct them for their mistakes, which eventually causing aggressive behaviour among them . Lastly, Modernisation also responsible for this.
To conclude, it is clear that current generation is more revolutionized, disobeyed , having tantrums which causing hindrance to learn moral values which cannot be seen in past. Eventually, this behavior has bad impact on buillding our society and maintaining cultural diversity.
It has been observed that past generation is more cultured, disciplined and have mannerism towards their parents as compared to today's children which lack all these qualities. In the following paragraphs, I will explain its adverse effects on society and the potential reasons responsible for such behaviour.
To embark on, every culture has some values, ethics which are passed from generations to generations that enrich them and keep them alive. Unfortunately, it has been changed now. For instance- in previous times children used to touch the feet of elders, wish them, respect them, obeys their orders that can rarely be seen these days. Adoloscents do whatever they like which has bad impact on our society.
There are various contributing factors accountable for such behaviour of children. Firstly, in the past, offsprings spend abundant time with their grandparents, parents which inculcate moral values and ethics . But now, there is a drastic change . Today children are busy with mobile phones , gadgets and other technology and rarely spend time with their elder generation and lacks all these qualities. Secondly, parents show more love and affection towards their wards and never correct them for their mistakes, which eventually causing aggressive behaviour among them . Lastly, Modernisation also responsible for this.
To conclude, it is clear that current generation is more revolutionized, disobeyed , having tantrums which causing hindrance to learn moral values which cannot be seen in past. Eventually, this behavior has bad impact on buillding our society and maintaining cultural diversity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
... which inculcate moral values and ethics . But now, there is a drastic change . To...
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Suggestion: .
...ics . But now, there is a drastic change . Today children are busy with mobile pho...
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Suggestion: ,
...day children are busy with mobile phones , gadgets and other technology and rarely...
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Suggestion: .
... causing aggressive behaviour among them . Lastly, Modernisation also responsible ...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...learn moral values which cannot be seen in past. Eventually, this behavior has bad impa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57317073171 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80404508639 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642276422764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2391083989 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411403202082 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120639921201 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148310548206 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281757559788 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.223927483227 0.056905535591 394% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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