Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
Peaceful life is a basic need of any society and without getting control over crimes, it cannot be achieved. Nowadays, ratio of crimes is significantly increasing; therefore, several factors are involved in this increasing trend of crime. Here, I will discuss the main reasons and give solution how it can be reduced.
The major cause of this worst trend is violence in movies which is a main attraction for young brains and sometimes youngsters do commit crime as an adventure by getting inspiration from movies. Secondly, video games are also equally responsible where teenagers involved in crime, because in video games, fighting and use of weapons are frequently showed and it influences youngsters to do the same thing in real life which is quite harmful. Furthermore, rate of unemployment is another reason which compels people to commit crimes like robbery, pick-pocket and snatching. For example, in my office, there was an office boy who was very hard and supporting his family, but unfortunately, due to downsizing he was terminated and after few months I read in the news paper that he was involved in a bank robbery and arrested by police.
It is really hard to eliminate crime in society, but the amount of crime can be reduced by creating awareness. Authorities cans organize seminars to educate parents about how they can prevent their children from committing crimes. Additionally, we can involve youngsters in positive activities like sports that can be beneficial in reducing crime. Furthermore, strong implementation of laws will definitely do things to deal with crime positively, because without fear of punishment, dream of peaceful society will not be true.
In conclusion, violence in movies, projection of crime in video games and unemployment are major reasons of increasing criminal activities in society. Therefore, serious steps should be taken as I mentioned above for reducing this trend.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
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... of peaceful society will not be true. In conclusion, violence in movies, proje...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26948051948 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93741106955 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600649350649 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9917691528 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.846153846 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135590958265 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548973970393 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437222547284 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961273317855 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332070627255 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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