Many crimes often related to consumption of alcohol. Some people think that best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective measure against crime? What other suggestions can you suggest?
In the last few decades, alcohol has become synonymous with crime. Strata of populace attribute alcohol as key ingredient for various criminal activities. However, they opine that banning alcohol is the most effective method to curb the ever-increasing crime rate. Obviously this is an efficient method to dampen the crime but certain other methods are adopted. Several other methods are discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, alcohol is restricted from drinking by even doctors because it leads to loss of senses. When people become unconscious they are more prone to indulge in criminal activities. This is the primary reason drink and drive are prohibited in every country as it acts as a threat not only for the person who consumed it but also for the people around. The heinous crimes such as rape, murder, and theft are committed after the intake of hard drinks or drugs. For instance, the ban on alcohol in Bihar has decreased the crime rate by 30 percent. This reveals that banning the sale of alcohol has placed a significant role in decreasing crime.
The other important steps which can be taken are the government should establish a rehabilitation center where they can have counseling from the doctor who can help them in leaving the habit of drink. Furthermore, they should be given some vocational training in the center which could assist them in getting a job. Apart from this, the government should launch an awareness program where the negative impact of alcohol can be explicitly exposed to the public.
To conclude, ban on alcohol is a crucial step that can help in the dampening rate of crime. I believe that along with this step guidance from doctors and awareness campaigns can be other effective solutions that can provide better results.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, apart from, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02693602694 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6130636121 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9650437925 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287400168745 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105076793049 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735958240055 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180944838129 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576572471177 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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