Many jobs at around the house are done manually, but could have been done by machines instead. What are the advantages or disadvantages of this? Give your opinion and include relevant examples
House jobs are not easy task to do. Most of the people take the support of machines to get the work done. There are some advantages of robotic work. However, the disadvantages are on much higher side.
First of all, reliance on machines make people more sluggish. Many house chores are now a days can be easily done manually, but because of availability of artificial intelligence, these works are dedicated to machines. For example, boiling water for tea or coffee does not require any heavy exercise but these machines like electric kettles or dispensers let people do the work quicker and easier and therefore convince them to make less efforts and let the machine do the rest.
Secondly, artificial intelligence create many health problems such as obesity. Increasing weight has now been one of the alarming point of unhealthy lives. Many people indulge in this problem due to depending on machine work. For example, previously my mother used to wash dishes with her bare hands but after the dish washer was purchased, the efforts were reduced to almost half. My mother was happy as now she has to make less efforts on dish washing but on the other hand she started gaining her weight. Before she was fit enough and used to take care of herself but now greatly engaged in medicines to keep her health steady.
In conclusion, despite the advantages of machines like fewer efforts and allow to dedicate their free time to other important tasks, the disadvantages have more strong points. Therefore, it is recommended that people should rely lesser on machines to keep active and healthy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...le more sluggish. Many house chores are now a days can be easily done manually, but becaus...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ore sluggish. Many house chores are now a days can be easily done manually, but becaus...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun efforts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ier and therefore convince them to make less efforts and let the machine do the rest...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun efforts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...mother was happy as now she has to make less efforts on dish washing but on the othe...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dedicating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: dedicating
...f machines like fewer efforts and allow to dedicate their free time to other important task...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92222222222 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51879355797 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0617755687 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157500376663 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566364850398 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446511558655 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104554774624 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441080876044 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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