Many people believe that education and high qualifications will bring success. Others think that it’s not required to achieve success in life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Everyone wants to and should be success in life because without it you would not be recognized in the society. Therefore, to success in the world many people believe that education and high qualification is must. However, some people have different opinion as they do not think education and high qualification necessary to achieve success in life. Let us, first of all discuss both views before giving own opinion.
Asserting to the positive side of the education, a good education is important because you will be able to think for yourself and intelligently communicate to others. Also, a well educated person get job offer very soon as compared to an illiterate because the employers will seek the most qualified and intelligent person to fill the vacancy because of the competition out there. Furthermore, there are so many professions which entail high qualification and degrees. For example, to become a doctor, a lawyer or an engineer etc. you should have academic knowledge in these fields. Hence we will not be successful in life until we improve our educational background.
However, some people are disagreeing with the above views. They argued that there are some other fields through which we can make the road to success even without any up skilling. There are so many successful artists who choose their careers in different area of interest which do not demand academic qualification and degree but only talent. There are many Singers, Actors, Player who are less educated but more successful. Not only that, there are also so many untutored but successful businessmen who have achieved the dignity in the world with their hardworking, risk and strong will power.
At last, by considering both of the views, I personally opined that in addition to hardworking and risk, education is equally important because without it other two factors to success may be futile in modern world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77607031678 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1068238693 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388306563209 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121005905432 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101932005537 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234302656762 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143796379188 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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