Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains.
Why do you think this happens?
What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains?
It is true that countless people give priority to move by car rather than by buses or trains. In my opinion, hassle-free movement can be the key reason for this situation and government could encourage people to use public transportations by giving tax privilege.
Primarily, citizens of many countries prefer to have a car as a mode of transportation, as it ensures stress-free as well as comfortable travel and the user does not need to wait for others. Furthermore, automobiles are blessings for the owners for a quick response. In an official emergency, for example, the person who has a private car, he would be able to get to the office quickly than others. So the reasons to choose to travel by a car cannot be denied.
However, the privilege of having an income tax reduction could be a better option for the government, which will be motivating for the passenger to use public vehicles. If a person moves by bus or train regularly, he will get some concession at the time of submitting yearly income tax. For instance, in many developed countries like Sweden, Denmark, the government has introduced ‘Thirty Percent Tax-Free’ scheme to encourage people to use local transports. Finally, privilege regarding tax could create some effects on people’s mind regarding the use of the public transportations.
In conclusion, although I think that many people are interested to use cars instead of buses or trains mainly for comfort, the government can change the situation by introducing a privilege like income tax reduction.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12204724409 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13719256405 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57874015748 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6530158264 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226003372994 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940928630365 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837189809204 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161416294751 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721337350277 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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