Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains.
Why do you think this happens?
What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains?
It is true that private cars have earned the reputation to become a popular mode of transportation. Countless users are using it instead of public transportation. What are the reasons behind it? This essay will discuss the causes of preferring to travel by cars rather than buses or trains and suggest some ways that the government could do to people to travel by buses or trains.
There are various reasons to prefer private cars instead of public transport. First of all, I think that comfort is the prime reason to have a car. In addition, opportunity to have a stress-free could be another reason because people have to wait for a long time for having a public transport. In India, for example, in the peak hours, bus travelers have to waste more than twenty minutes to have a bus bound to their destination. If any problem occurs on the road, they will have to wait more. All these are the reasons to have a personal car.
Government could launch numerous projects to encourage people to use public transport. Firstly, ‘Ten Percent tax rebate’ project might be a good option for the government to motivate its citizen to use public transport. If a person travels by buses or trains, he will be able to get that facility. Furthermore, imposing heavy tax on private cars might be a good option. For instance, in Korea, government has imposed heavy tax on luxury cars while it has also confirmed the availability of the buses and trains so that the general people would be able to get the benefit of it.
In conclusion, today people are more interested to have a personal car. In my opinion, the long wait for the public transportation and comfort of a private car are the main reasons of it. Government’s various initiatives like tax rebate or heavy tax on private cars could motivate people to travel by buses or trains.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'public transport'.
Suggestion: public transport
...have to wait for a long time for having a public transport. In India, for example, in the peak hou...
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Line 7, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te people to travel by buses or trains.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77258566978 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76286229495 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470404984424 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6624667422 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294801956067 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984115209539 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125495374916 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220815689793 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119273108424 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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