Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains.
Why do you think this happens?
What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains?
It is a fact that countless people prefer to travel by cars instead of buses and cars. What are the reasons behind it? To motivate people to travel by public transport what government can do. This essay will discuss both of these questions.
There are many reasons to use private cars. First and foremost, to save valuable time, many travelers use cars. Waiting for buses or trains is a common scenario in many countries which means that one has to waste a lot of time to reach his destination. Sometimes situation is worse during office hours than normal hours. For example, in India, passengers have to wait for more than thirty minutes at the bus station to get their desired bus at 8.30 am whereas at 10.00 am, they have to wait for fifteen to twenty minutes to have their bus. Because cars function as a time-saver, people prefer to have it.
Second reason for using car is comfort. Reservation of seats is not always possible in a public transport. After long working hours, it is really very uncomfortable. This type of situation is very common in Sri Lanka. The person who owns a car, he does not need to face this kind of difficulties. Therefore people always like to travel by cars.
Under this circumstances, to motivate people to use public transport, government needs to take some initiatives which is different. Firstly, “Yearly Income Tax Remission” project could be a good initiative. In the countries like USA, UK, Canada, this type of project is successfully implemented. If a person regularly travels by buses or trains, he can avail this opportunity. Another initiative might be effective is “Car Free Day” project. One day or two days in a week, the street will be car free so that people will be inspired to use public transport.
In conclusion, the essay discussed the reasons of using cars ignoring public transport. In my opinion, to save time and to have a comfortable journey, people are doing this. Government could change the situation by introducing projects like “Yearly Income Tax Remission”, “Car Free Day” etc.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'public transport'.
Suggestion: public transport
...tion of seats is not always possible in a public transport. After long working hours, it is really...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...need to face this kind of difficulties. Therefore people always like to travel by cars. ...
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Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...always like to travel by cars. Under this circumstances, to motivate people to us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98005698006 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85809659792 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547008547009 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7826897029 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.92 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.04 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30339199552 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915365409058 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105242577808 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193195353473 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131436765833 0.056905535591 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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