Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains.Why do you think this happens?What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains?
It is a fact that countless people prefer cars instead of buses and trains as a mode of transportation. What are the reasons behind it and what government can do to motivate people to travel by public transport? This essay will discuss both of these questions.
First and foremost, to save valuable time, many travelers use cars as waiting for buses or trains has become a common scenario in many countries. For example, in India, buses or trains are delayed for more than thirty minutes during office hours whereas it is delayed for 15 to 20 minutes during normal hours. Second reason for using car is coziness. Reservation of seats is not always possible in a bus or train. After long working hours, it is really very uncomfortable. Using a personal car is considered as a solution of it.
Under these circumstances, government needs to take initiative which is different from usual to inspire people to use public transport. Firstly, “Yearly Income Tax Remission” project could be a good step since it is successfully implemented in the countries like USA, UK and Canada. If a person regularly travels by buses or trains, he will be able to avail this opportunity. Another initiative might be effective is “Car Free Day” project. One day or two days in a week, the street will be car free so that people will be inspired to use public transport. All these different attempts can be used by government to motivate general people.
In conclusion, in my opinion, to save time and to have a comfortable journey, people are using cars and government could change the situation by introducing projects like “Yearly Income Tax Remission”, “Car Free Day”.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04255319149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00822941162 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0416496599 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290507363234 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964168513828 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100334039819 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197616208099 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140522598915 0.056905535591 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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