Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains.Why do you think this happens?What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains?
It is a fact that countless people prefer cars instead of buses and trains as a mode of transportation. What are the reasons behind it and what government can do to motivate people to travel by public transport? This essay will discuss both of these questions.
First and foremost, to save valuable time, many travelers use cars as waiting for buses or trains has become a common scenario in many countries. For example, in India, buses or trains are delayed for more than thirty minutes during office hours whereas during normal hours it is 15 to 20 minutes behind. Second reason for using car is coziness. Reservation of seats is not always possible in a bus or train which is very uncomfortable. For the long journey, it is really difficult.
Under these circumstances, government needs to take initiatives which will inspire people to use public transport. Firstly, “Yearly Income Tax Remission” project could be a good step since it is successfully implemented in the countries like USA, UK and Canada. If a person regularly travels by buses or trains, he will be able to avail this opportunity. Another effective initiative is “Car Free Day” project. One day or two days in a week, the street will be car free so that people will be inspired to use public transport.
In conclusion, in my opinion, to save time and to have a comfortable journey, people are using cars and government could change the situation by introducing projects like “Yearly Income Tax Remission”, “Car Free Day”.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07480314961 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03969899489 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7868965382 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0714285714 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28989302995 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101481642069 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106017043854 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194295577424 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142178600961 0.056905535591 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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