Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can’t be bought. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
Optimistic people believe that everything can be earned with money. However, other school of thoughts have completely different perception that somethings can never be compensated with monetary values. I will the second thought with the help of reasons and illustrations.
First of all, humanity speaks your heart and mind. It has a direct connection with your good thoughts you might have for others. For example, a famous personality, Dalai Lama who was a great compassionate has said that 'my religion is my kindness'. It does not matter how wealthy you are or how much your net worth is you cannot touch someone's heart until you fit yourself into their shoes.
The other important thing is the trust that can be earned almost without any cost. The only cost to pay is your time. Once you build enough confidence in your partner that she can trust you or can share anything then she will be like an open book to you and would give all her life without having a second thought. For instance, a study has shown that men are stronger than women physically but emotionally it is a vice versa. We humans are mostly scare of putting our trust in some one because we are more afraid of being ditched or our emotions can be mocked. Therefore, it is very important that we should not play with the feelings and be honest with them and even to ourselves
To elucidate, humanity and trust are the combination of sentiments which cannot be separated from our lives. You surely can buy the whole world with your power and money but you will not be able to capture the feelings and for that a good heart and respected thought is essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66089965398 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45663531105 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584775086505 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2521585136 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2142857143 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272585734089 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940114388827 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523784424985 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163128866247 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386579705556 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.