In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
The world population is increasing in rates that are never seen before. Therefore, building houses is essential for humanbeings to live in peacfully. There are a debate on the place to build homes whether to construct them in villages or not. In my view, people still can conserve the countryside areas and build accommodations in the cities bacause still more space is available to utilize and it will save the wildlife as well.
Avoiding home construction in rural areas saves endangered animals from extinction. Usually wild creatures are curious to explore around construction areas, which leads them sometimes to eat chemicals and perish. I remember one of the housing projects was being built in a free range, tens of dead bodies were layed down around the fence. Most of these animals were either trying to skip over the fence, or drink polluted water then got killed. An undescribable tragic scene I saw with my eyes.
Another choice is suggested by building apartements in the form of high-rises in the city. Not only it will be faster to accomplish, but also it is a inexpensive solution. cities are full of well structured builings that can handle adding many more floors on the top. Tokyo for instance in the new milliniume has doubled the number of flates within 10 years. If the same number of new apartments is built in rural areas, more than 30 years is required.
To conclude, it is definitely not neccessary to use countryside to build new accommodations and it must be protected for many reasons. wildlife is a global responsibility and it should be consereved. Moreover, cities have enough vertical space to create more living spaces.IIt is extremely cruicial step to think twice before taking a desicions on building new homes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01020408163 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82053811095 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636054421769 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8231319532 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6470588235 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266610116923 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686978732928 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661847313307 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151820814877 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757634926502 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.