Many students around the world don’t choose science subjects at university. Give the reasons for this and describe the impact on the community?
Versatility among subjects has increased with the passage of time. The majority of the students around the globe are deemed to opt for arts and business subjects instead of science at university. There are several reasons attributed to this phenomenon which has largely impacted society.
To begin with, earlier parents forced their kids to pursue science at the higher because they had a prejudice that it represents the status and the only way to grab higher-level jobs. However, nowadays the students are keen on business and arts subjects because of their scope in the international market. Even after the border, it has become easy to install the business in the other country if one possesses capital for investment and performs any art for example music, dance, or painting. These subjects are recognized as far more easier than science subjects and do not guaranty any job. In spite of being easy, they instill an individual with talent and skill which can later help him in grabbing job opportunities. For instance, the survey done by “The Time” reveals that businessmen and artists have 56 percent more turn over than scientists and science personnel.
However, this changing trend has greatly impacted the pattern of society. For instance, earlier in a same locality if there were 80 houses around 76 house’s kids either have done engineering or science which was more than 90 percent. Now, the same is the issue with these subjects but creativity has decreased. Businesses are occupying new spaces on the earth which in turn leads to deforestation and enhances global warming. Additionally, these industries generated employment for many people. Artists are known for their entertainment and work.
To conclude, the trend of the subjects is changing and now people like to take arts and business subjects which make them skillful. This also leads to some environmental issues but even generates jobs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 531, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...g. These subjects are recognized as far more easier than science subjects and do not guaran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18649517685 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69091684897 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591639871383 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.079212871 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8823529412 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235403139245 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740709503947 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544570452678 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157671693367 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747167115569 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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