More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplaces. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Work from home culture has seen a significant rise in recent decade. People have different opinion for the same; some believe it is a good thing as it provides extended time for family while others believe it is mixing work related stress in to the home environment. Both views will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. In my opinion, working from home brings along many positive changes in personal lives of employee.
Work from home means drastic increase in time spend with family. Firstly, employees save travel time which in most cases quite stressful for physical and mental health and takes on an average 1-2 hours. Work from home allows this time to be well spent with family without any hustle bustle of traffic and pollution. Secondly, employees can work based on their own timings or in intervals thus spending quality time with family. This also enabled workers to become more supportive for family as in urgent cases they can log off and finish personal chores and come back to work later. Clearly, it helps employees to support and spend extra quality time with their family.
Employees also saves a lot of money which is otherwise spend on travel and eating at work. This also helps them to increase their financial savings and thus in-turn helps employee’s family.
On the other hand, working from home means all work related stress is mixed with personal life. A thin line that divides work & personal time can be crossed during work from home and stress can impact family members as well. For example, a failure in any work task could result in disappointing atmosphere at home. Feeling could become all relative and person may not find required solace at home as that becomes more of a work place. Clearly there are risk points and work from home need to be carried out with utmost precautions.
To conclude, rising culture of work from home provide a person much more free time with family and helps to save finances. Advantages of this culture outweigh disadvantages by huge margin and there is no doubt that in upcoming decades it is going to be much more common. People should maintain a clear boundary to make sure work related stress should not impact personal lives and enjoy multidimensional advantages of work from home.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, no doubt, in most cases, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8828125 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40597165654 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5234375 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7066276091 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266779934305 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918028782277 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043167525471 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157738877053 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743824603088 0.056905535591 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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