News Stories on TV and newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.
What is your opinion?
Media, nowadays, playing vital role in the progress of societies. Innovative and creative ideas, such as, approaching the public through visual techniques are implemented recently. In my view, such ways should be introduced every now and then to educate the societies.
It is established fact, that human get inspired quickly when exposed to new environment. Media previously focused the elite class only by delivering the news in the form of lectures. However, now both electronic and press media developed new ways to reach out more people. In this regard, displaying pictures to transfer the ideas and news has been adopted. In a survey, conducted by a local magazine people not only supported the idea but also shown mirth over it.
Words can only become powerful if they are understood, otherwise, all efforts are useless. If words are illustrated with such techniques which make them convenient to understand, then desired purpose can be attained. For instance, my friend was finding it difficult to read English newspaper, but when came across the mnemonic techniques, he find it easy to comprehend the words. In today’s era, audience have less time, to make it worthy such methods are handy and produce everlasting effects.
To sum up, I am strongly in favor of using skillful system to educate the humanity. In my opinion, World peace and prosperity can only be achieved if people can distinguish between right and wrong. Media, perhaps, is the significant source to train and guide more and more people to attain such goals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...my view, such ways should be introduced every now and then to educate the societies. It is esta...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...came across the mnemonic techniques, he find it easy to comprehend the words. In tod...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15476190476 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74477847812 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670634920635 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4703261115 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0808194328556 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246233157741 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322665384776 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0460701315958 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040133876144 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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