Nowadays, many families migrate to other countries due to employment. Some people say it benefits the children of immigrants’ families. Other say it is more difficult for the children of these families.
Discuss both views and give you opinion.
Every year around 1 million population all over the world migrate from one place to another due to employment opportunities. Some say that it has positive effect on young adults others think it has negative repercussions.
One of the benefits I can see is children can acquire advance and free education. Many western countries are now offering quality education like Finland, Germany, France. Even countries like Germany not only providing excellent education service but also giving scholarships to those who cannot afford tuition fee. Many new legal migrants take the full advantage from this opportunity by getting admission for their children which they might not be able to get in their original countries. This does not only help migrants to hold their foot in a new homeland but also giving free access to school for many children.
On the contrary, children might not be able to adjust themselves in any new hometown. One of the reasons is they are living in a place where they have childhood friends or they have any emotional attachments with their extended families like grandmother or grandfather. For instance, one of my friend recently moved to US with her two children as she was employed in one of the US company. One of them is happy and luckily now employed in a reputed company. Though, another child had become homesick and he started taking drugs. When my friend came to know about his habit she was really upset and now she moved back in her original country. Thus, moving to a new land might have adverse effect on children.
In conclusion, both side has the arguments about positive effects and the drawbacks too of migration. I recommend that parents need to analyse the conditions of individual children whether they are able to adjust in new country by having a smooth conversation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...untry by having a smooth conversation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96078431373 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66754759254 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2215405525 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161500183057 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507700694113 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387267022032 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961493624047 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350706689217 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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