Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
The revenue of the computer game company has been blooming since the last decade, gaining the insight of the increasing number of the game players. It is believable that, among these players,
the children contribute large proportion, leading to a special concern about the negative impact of the computer games toward them. In this essay, we will focus on the demerits along with some suggestions.
The major concern for children playing computer games relates to the side effect of their physical body and social skill development. Firstly, the children sitting whole day in front of computer playing game does not involve any muscular movement, leading to weaken their physical body. Another side effect is regarded as their social skill development. Again, the children who are facing computer game whole day cannot develop a proper communication skill because they are lacking of human interaction. The children will usually mature into introvert finally. From these two points of view, playing computer game indeed has detrimental effects on the children. Therefore, some actions must be taken to tackle the problems.
Both the game developer and their parent play a crucial role to relieve the problem. For the game developer, they can introduce the child protective measure inside the game. For example, if the game is playing over 2 hours, the game play will automatically stop and alert the player with warning message. In addition, the parent are also responsible to their child by taking them out of the computer. For example, they can bring their child to park or play some sports with them, allowing them to have more physical movement as well as more human interaction.
To sum up, children playing computer game do hinder their development of physical body and social skill. As suggested above, some measures must be taken accordingly in order to minimize the negative effect. Personally speaking, there is common adage which says that our children is our master of further society. Hence, we should by all mean protect our children health so as to guarantee the health of future society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 371, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...by all mean protect our children health so as to guarantee the health of future society....
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'as well as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263707571802 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.151436031332 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0835509138381 0.0946595960268 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0339425587467 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0522193211488 0.0437548338989 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120104438642 0.122226691241 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0548302872063 0.0403226058552 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53696251511 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287206266319 0.0326793684256 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00261096605744 0.00163938923432 159% => OK
Determiners: 0.109660574413 0.0861772015684 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.023498694517 0.021408717616 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00522193211488 0.011925033212 44% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2111.0 1933.35771543 109% => OK
No of words: 343.0 316.048096192 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15451895044 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.396501457726 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294460641399 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201166180758 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0874635568513 0.137316102897 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53696251511 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.037074148 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559766763848 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 61.6060326593 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0526315789 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5254332365 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.105263158 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.842105263158 0.814263465372 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.4986957189 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.84615384615 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40843832214 0.332605444948 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0962463973699 0.102741220458 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0841302777421 0.0668466124924 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.516044490723 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163975316646 0.148594505496 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155590134344 0.134430193775 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790102434175 0.0742795772207 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.327581992851 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0585060256737 0.0638462369009 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268113964307 0.228012699653 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378194393016 0.058150111329 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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