Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that the number of people who hold the highly responsible in the government is growing. While some people are opposed to this ideal. I support the view that this trend is beneficial at present.
On the one hand, there are some reasons make citizens embarrassment for supporting the young. It is hard for older people to accept the younger generation into the major leadership that requires decisive and knowledge, especially in eastern nations. In addition, at the same place, the youth and the aged have the similar qualifications and knowledge, the juveniles are usually underestimated due to the lack of experiences. This means that if there are challenges, the younger people are more likely to make the mistakes and resulted in affecting to the lives of the individuals.
On the other hand, I suppose that senior citizens should encourage young generation to take part in the vital position in the nation committees. It is obvious that those people who are youth have creative and modern ways of thinking, so that they usually show the innovative thinking. Moreover, the young people have a long period of time to contribute to their nation. For example, when the younger and older people have the same qualifications and abilities in the similar fields, the young can devote themselves to development of a prospect country.
In conclusion, the young generation gradually has the important talks in the political area. Only by doing so can country raise awareness of the youth into both developing economic and maintaining the national peace.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sponsible in the government is growing. While some people are opposed to this ideal. ...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ittees. It is obvious that those people who are youth have creative and modern ways of ...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... Moreover, the young people have a long period of time to contribute to their nation. For exam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10116731518 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84983264857 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8814896058 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206092378975 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729271863998 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045367522912 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117428349227 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398132801031 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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