Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening?
what can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The rate of producing waste has gone almost double in last few decades. The increasing number of waste has been one of the the major issues these days. There are multiple reasons behind producing more rubbish. To stop this activity, government need to make some robust move.
The reason behind producing more waste is increasing level of consumption of disposal goods and also increasing number of preservative items. First, many people nowadays prefer to consume goods contain in disposable container because it is easy to discard after using the main ingredient. For example, when we visit any restaurant, the waiter serve us with mineral water which comes in a plastic bottle. After consumption of water, the bottle face the route of thrash bin. People brutally waste the bottles while knowing the consequences of their act. This practice create more rubbish every year all over the word and causing many negative repercussions for the whole globe. Secondly, reason is people prefer buying preservative food rather cook and eat fresh. These preservative items comes with multiple packaging. When anyone buy these goods and come home and unpack these eatables, they often encounter multiple packages. This is very important step to keep the food away from being rotten. However, we forget to keep in mind that such safety of food is unhealthy for the environment because these packaging ultimately turn into thrash and hence increase the volume of thrash each day.
The governments of all the countries need to be very strict. Firstly, they need to regulate rules and regulations of companies manufacturing such items that create thrash. If any of the company disobey or break the rules, heavy penalties need to be imposed on them. Other than being strict, the open campaign for everyone should be initiated in which everyone should be invited to learn about the negative effects of producing waste. For instance, in Kigali, Rwanda, the government has launched a program in which the government encourage the citizens to clean the streets once a month. Such programs can definitely bring enormous change in people's attitude towards producing waste.
All in all, producing waste is a sensitive issue and combating this problem is sensitive and as well as complex. However, government can bring changes to this habit by educating people and if necessary, sentence punishment to anyone whoever break the rules.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the; the
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Suggestion: all over the world
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...ment to anyone whoever break the rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20769230769 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57576961045 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0909765597 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3043478261 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9565217391 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95652173913 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171839382411 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496734741623 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059745164314 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108428799963 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317576073779 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.