Once children start school, the teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Children brains adopt things much quicker than we thought. Teenagers spend as much time with their teachers as much with their parents. Despite that, kids cannot be influenced by them more than their parents. Therefore, I do not agree with the statement. Analyzing their emotional attachments with their parents and making the first step towards their practical lives will prove this.
First of all, children have direct connections with their parents. These emotions are naturally build in every child. Regardless of their first day at school and continuing their education with the same teacher for a longer period, a child cannot build stronger relation with the teachers more than their parents. For example, before starting my school life, I always analyzed the behavior of my father and tried to follow the same things as my father used to. Even after attending the school, spending most of my time with my father, I developed the skills of act, speak and walk like him. Though, I was not able to understand everything but internally I tried to memorize everything that my father did. This eventually brought me the man I am today. This is not because what I learnt in class but what I my father taught me.
Secondly, teachers can only give you an overlook about the external world that it is going to be for us in future but it is our parents who hold our hands and help us to make the first step towards the practical world. They give us the hands on experience to indulge in social life. They encourage us to analyze this world in different angle that a teacher could hardly be able to do so. Our parents teach us to behave, eat, drink, talk and wear things that goes according to the present conditions. Undoubtedly, our lives are more influenced by our parents act more than the teachers.
All in all, parents are the best guiders in our lives. Needless to say, teachers play important role in our lives too but parents are the ultimate characters who give right directions and persuade us to be influenced by them. Therefore, it is without any question, parents influence our lives more than our teachers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77717391304 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45834267831 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527173913043 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3677803591 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7142857143 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5238095238 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264275738146 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771029177734 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636577654313 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147005750277 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574183327065 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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