ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The advent of tecnnology has brought many advantageous changes in everybody's lives. Infact, it has spread its branches almost everywhere in the world. Needless to say, communication has not remained untouched from its positive impact, as it has modernaized all forms of communication via calling and text,consequently reduced the need of writing the letters. However, I also share the same view and willl illustrate about it in coming paragraphs.
First and foremost, development of new application such as whatsapp, messengers, facebook etcetera has almost diminshed the importance of hand written letters.At present, in organisations,people use electronic mails for formal writing, whereas, previously it was done manually.Moreover, for everyday conversations, individauls are using mobile phone ,which ultimately supressed the need of posting the letters, as most of conversations are being done through facebook, twitter. For example- unlike past,army personnels usually wrote the letters to their loved ones, now they communicate through calls, is really an convenient approach for them.
Furthermore, writing letters manually are more time consuming , inconvenient and much resourcefull, compared to new communication sources. Earlier, one has to write the letter and then post it to post office, then further transported to destination, was a long process, needed days to reach is now totally replaced with effective and efficient communication sources like smartphones , which only takes few seconds to convey message.
To conclude, it is evident that modernaised ways of communication is far more approachable, convenient and portable comparitivey writing letters on paper. Therfore, modern communication is a wonderful gift of technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , consequently
...ms of communication via calling and text,consequently reduced the need of writing the letters...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
... the importance of hand written letters.At present, in organisations,people use el...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...ten letters.At present, in organisations,people use electronic mails for formal writing...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...hereas, previously it was done manually.Moreover, for everyday conversations, individaul...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ions, individauls are using mobile phone ,which ultimately supressed the need of p...
^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the conversations') or simply say ''most conversations''.
Suggestion: most of the conversations; most conversations
...sed the need of posting the letters, as most of conversations are being done through facebook, twitte...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , army
...ebook, twitter. For example- unlike past,army personnels usually wrote the letters to...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ey communicate through calls, is really an convenient approach for them. Furthe...
^^
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...letters manually are more time consuming , inconvenient and much resourcefull, com...
^^
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t communication sources like smartphones , which only takes few seconds to convey ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, whereas, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95652173913 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4973577108 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.699604743083 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.74251517 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.7 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124234187254 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466917195759 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030592369772 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730793767058 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142403352675 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.