Over population of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Hong Kong is well known as world class city, but also known as world most crowded place. Such a tiny area already has 700 million peoples living. During 2003, attributed with the most sorrowful year among all peoples in Hong Kong, severe atypical respiratory symptom was widely outspreading in the city, causing one thousand peoples inflected and more than one hundred peoples die. Although the outbreak of the disease has been erased, it has brought a special concern on the problem of over population. In this essay, we will identify the major issue caused by overcrowding along with some suggestions.
As stated in the introduction, the most serious problem of overcrowding is the ease of disease transmission. For many kind of epidemic diseases, only a droplet of cough and sneeze from the inflected person is enough to spread into others. Hence, people living in high population area will certainly have higher chance of getting inflected. That is the reason why the serve atypical respiratory symptom widely inflected many people within short period of time in Hong Kong.
There are several measures for the government and the public to tackle these issues. For the government, all necessary resources, such as financial or material support, should be allocated to the hygiene department to further improve our healthcare system as they are the first gateway to protect our health. The resources can be used to develop a better broadcast channel to the citizens so that they can state alert on any new disease spreading out. For the public, individual should keep a high standard on personal hygiene and wear mask if feeling unwell to avoid inflecting to others.
As a Hong Kong's citizen, the experience we learn from year of 2003 is extremely costly. There are many metropolises like Hong Kong with overcrowded population. The governments of these areas must take extra precautions in order to avoid the tragedy happened again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...s the ease of disease transmission. For many kind of epidemic diseases, only a droplet of...
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Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...dely inflected many people within short period of time in Hong Kong. There are several mea...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...resources, such as financial or material support, should be allocated to the hygi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'in short', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270114942529 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.14367816092 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0977011494253 0.0946595960268 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0402298850575 0.0501214627716 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0201149425287 0.0437548338989 46% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135057471264 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0574712643678 0.0403226058552 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66126930942 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287356321839 0.0326793684256 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00574712643678 0.00163938923432 351% => OK
Determiners: 0.10632183908 0.0861772015684 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0201149425287 0.021408717616 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00287356321839 0.011925033212 24% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1942.0 1933.35771543 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10691823899 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38679245283 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295597484277 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.203846283523 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119496855346 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66126930942 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619496855346 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 72.1783949835 60.7387585426 119% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.875 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5568327767 49.517814964 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.375 127.492653851 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.814263465372 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 49.4347484277 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.2676056338 1.69124875643 134% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156569120812 0.332605444948 47% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0908942543358 0.102741220458 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0688363857656 0.0668466124924 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520065185092 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133452305291 0.148594505496 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624830518172 0.134430193775 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375378845368 0.0742795772207 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.271076082381 0.324371583561 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0644028179054 0.0638462369009 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10413169262 0.228012699653 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125383914145 0.058150111329 22% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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