The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traffic congestion and pollution has inevitably increased in 20th Century. I partially agree with the opinion of one vehicle allotment to each family. Though, there are other several ways by which the pollution and congestion can be controlled.
To embark upon, not only vehicles but other aspects are equally contributing in pollution such as industries. Some industries such as steel industries, plastic industries and coal industries producing great amount of CO2 emission which is enough to damage the environment. They are equally participating to evading the green environment concept as much as cars are producing.
Additionally, low level of public transport encouraging people to use their own vehicle. Under develop countries like Pakistan are still suffering from this issue. Most of the transport facilities are in bad condition. Also, the uneven roads make the commuting more worse.
However, vehicles also play a great part in increasing traffic jams and pollution. For example, in Dubai back in 2008, it used to be a massive traffic jams due to diversified employment opportunity and the hub of commercial activities. The traffic congestion took people hours to reach their destinations.
To elucidate, all these factors contributing in congestion and in terms of pollution it could be noise, gas, Co2 emission that are greatly affecting the globe. To refrain, government need to take the stern checks not only on vehicles but also other factors that are polluting the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...so, the uneven roads make the commuting more worse. However, vehicles also play a great...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'massive traffic'.
Suggestion: massive traffic
...e, in Dubai back in 2008, it used to be a massive traffic jams due to diversified employment oppo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44017094017 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95849055676 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2447947299 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120196656161 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391995423962 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390130965459 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650701688508 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058084268063 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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