Parents are the most effective teachers. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Please provide specific reasons and examples in your response.
These days, parents play an important role in shaping kids life. But are they really that important in raising kids is argued. Some people believe that kids biological mother and father are their best trainer. I, however, completely disagree from this and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples.
First of all, many people plays a critical role in teaching kids. In school, kids learn many skills, required for future endeavors. Take Japan as an example where kids are taught about the importance of cleaning and to do so they are asked to clean their own classrooms. If parents are only teacher then school will become redundant.
Another reason why I disagree with parents being the only way of learning, is that many other aspect also help in carving the life of pupils. Growing with many ups and downs in life, kids learn the way of leading their own life. On top of that, Life experiences teach them how to handle complex situations and the way forward. In my personal experiences, I have known many children grown up without their parents and now they are doing great. What is more, not only parents but also life experiences help the kids to excel in life.
On the contrary, parental guidance is also necessary for every kids, it will help in early stages of life. Born and bred up in focused parental hood, little ones learn many life challenging difficulties. For instance, teaching how to talk, how to walk and what to eat have been taught by parents. As a result, early childhood care is also needed.
In conclusion, it is, although, a common belief that teaching can be done only by parents.I believe that experiences in life and other peoples also make kids grow learned. Personally, I think biological parents are not best teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, then, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the contrary, what is more, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80392156863 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43216305935 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.789212268 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3684210526 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36842105263 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102152874647 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346713171283 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381548764822 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575969234684 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201193045535 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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