People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
The purpose of education varies from person to person as it is always difficult to figure out the exact reason. University education, which always paves the way to have a good job. In my opinion, there are three reasons for the general people to go to colleges or universities.
One of the cardinal reason is that the opportunity to develop expertise in a particular field of knowledge. At the high school, a pupil has to study a lot of subjects without special concentration on particular subject. So, after completing this level, interested people are attracted to get into higher education.
The second reason is hidden in basic human instinct. When a person sees that his/her friend is going to start higher education then it attracts him/her much. Apart from this, they are also motivated by their well-wishers to get admit into colleges or university because of the extensive demand of this level’s degrees.
Thirdly, for some occupation university based education is important. For example, to become a lecturer, it is necessary to have PhD and it can be obtained only from tertiary level education. Besides, to join in the profession like researcher, it is good to have research based education which is not possible to get before undergraduate.
Equally, people’s views regarding education have changed in many ways. Many companies are advertising more jobs for the bachelor degree holders, in some cases, it is extended to master’s degree as well. This is not a bad sign but the indication of the acceptance of higher studies.
In conclusion, it is hard to determine the purpose of higher education but before getting involved in this level, it is important to think about it wisely and then pursue this level. I, also, believe that having higher education is always necessary for not only having a bright future but also to enlighten oneself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ason is hidden in basic human instinct. When a person sees that his/her friend is go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, regarding, second, so, then, third, thirdly, well, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11003236246 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88376572814 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5661193801 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8823529412 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159756096007 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559686522832 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576691554092 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085904519528 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447121672217 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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