People buy a product if it fulfills their needs; there is no need for
advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?
It is widely believed that advertisement serves no purpose as people purchase products according
to their needs. But, I completely disagree with this statement. According to me advertisements
provide information about the new and upcoming products in the market. In the forthcoming
paragraphs, I shall explain how advertisements at times help to form better choices about the
products.
Firstly, advertisements help to create awareness about new and upgraded products in the market.
It helps keep the consumer updated about the variety of products available in the market at
affordable prices. For example, advertisements helped Kindle to promote its business to a wide
range of customers. Similarly, through advertisements, new companies get a chance to endorse
their products to unknown consumers and increase their reach.
Secondly, advertisements can be beneficial for both sellers and consumers. Sellers can promote
their goods and services through advertisements, and consumers can know the information of
goods and discount deals in the market. Moreover, it helps consumers to make more informed
decisions. Also, consumers grow aware of brands that cater their needs better from the
advertisements. It also helps businesses to build brand recognition.
In conclusion, companies certainly fool their consumers through fancy advertisements. But I
can't entirely agree with the belief that advertisements do not serve any purpose. Indeed, there
are good and bad advertisements. Still, it plays a very significant role in society by helping
companies create more awareness amongst the consumers about the availability of products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ompletely disagree with this statement. According to me advertisements provide information abo...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rs through fancy advertisements. But I cant entirely agree with the belief that adv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85596707819 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30622006644 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584362139918 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.272305931 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7058823529 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2941176471 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20634842021 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673931042683 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581836619024 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650543967291 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597696303969 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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