People remember special gifts or presents that they receive. Why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are numerous occasions in an individual's life to make him/her feel special. The best way to accomplish this is through gifts or presents. Therefore, these gifts are cherished forever.
Firstly, gifts are means of showing love and affection towards others. For instance, due to your busy schedule you were not able to catch up with your friend since long, but you recall his/her birthday and astonish him/her with a present of his/her choice. In that case he/she will feel special and reciprocate your love in the same way.
Secondly, gift given by a person who is no longer alive is always close to heart. Children treasure the presents given by their grandparents during festivals. These presents are a keepsake for them and will never like to part with them no matter how obsolete the same becomes.
On the other hand, combined or joint gifts can fulfill the financial needs of an individual. For example, last year one of my friend was in need of a microwave oven, unfortunately due to limited source of income the family could not afford it. So me along with other five friends contributed for the same. Not only did it bring a smile on her face but also served her purpose.
Similarly, adolescents love it when their parents and friends shower them with presents much required by them. They look forward to their birthdays and special occasions so that they can be bestowed with amazing surprises.
To recapitulate, gifts represent warmth, remembrance and forgiveness. All these reasons make it even more special for the receiver as well as the giver.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
There are numerous occasions in an individuals life to make him/her feel special. The ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93984962406 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5624320483 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0085476738 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2941176471 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41176470588 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148436555354 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470171442122 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289924148664 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789260851366 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312020239475 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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