People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factor. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people are not only shopping in physical stores in malls but they are also shopping online from websites such as amazon.com, taobao.com, etc. There is a fair amount of people believe that shopping habits of people depends more on the age classification rather than others.
In my opinion, I disagree with that idea and this essay will argue why the age group is not main influential factor of the shopping habits.
On the one hand, I agree the age group potentially affects how people go shopping due to the number of connection. When people become more mature, they will have more connections and they will have a chance of meeting more friends who have own style that could affect their shopping habits and style. According to the report from Adidas, the age group from 30 years olds to 45 years old, which has the most connection compared to other groups, is easily influenced while seeing their friends wear new cloth. This example supported the argument that the age group affects shopping habits of people.
Although the age cluster is one of the factors affecting shopping habits, I believe there are several factors giving more influence to the shopping activity of people. Firstly, income is a vital important factor that affects directly the shopping frequency of residents because they obviously cannot go shopping without money. Secondly, gender is also one of those factors. It is easy to see a great deal of people who usually go to malls for shopping is female. To support this, the study of Nike pointed out clearly that about 70% of shopaholics are female. These examples strongly supported the opinion that there are different reasons that contribute more to the shopping frequency of people than the age group.
This essay argued why the age group is not considered as the main factor that affects the shopping habits of people. In my opinion, I totally agree with this argument because income and gender are two factors will affect shopping habits more than the age group as discussed in the essay.
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Suggestion:
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also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93895348837 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41637972069 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479651162791 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2876091178 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.266666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404492424181 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150869485218 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865736263018 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24385947296 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401058160319 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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