People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factor. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people are not only shopping in malls but they are also shopping online from eCommerce sites such as amazon.com, taobao.com, etc. There is a debate that whether people’s shopping habits relied more on the age classification or not. I believe there are different factors, which influence shopping habits rather than the age group and this essay will argue this opinion.
On the one hand, the age group potentially affects how frequent people go shopping. There is a fact that when people become more mature, they will have more connections. According to the report from Adidas, the age group of people from 30 years olds to 45 years old has the most connection comparing to other group and this group is most addicted to shopping. This example supported the argument that the age group classifies shopping habits.
Despite the age cluster is one of the factors affecting shopping habits, however, there are several factors that are more influential to the shopping activity of people. The first important reason is income that affects directly the frequency of shopping. There is a fact that residents cannot buy cloth, groceries, and other stuff without money. The second reason affecting shopping behavior is gender. It is easy to catch the fact that a great deal of people who usually go to malls for shopping is female. To support this, the study of Nike presented that about 70% of people who are shopaholic are female. These examples strongly supported the opinion that the age group is not a major influential factor in terms of the shopping habit of people.
This essay argued why the age group is not considered as the main factor that affects the shopping habits of people. In my opinion, I totally agree that gender and income are two major reasons that will bring more influence to shopping behavior than the age group.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 580, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96463022508 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.502281297 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485530546624 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.905620518 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361825781592 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126129099037 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702731994824 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245960287609 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290435785953 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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