People who travel to another country to live, work or study for a period of time often suffer badly from homesickness.
Why is this?
What are the best ways to reduce this problem.
Nowadays, there are more and more people who leave their country and go to another place for different purpose. It makes some people feel sick as they face a totally new environment to what they used to grow up. This essay will discuss about the solution of this problem.
First of all, there are some ideas to overcome the uncomfortable feeling for someone who miss their home while staying in a different country. Joining communities which operating by people who from the same country. It helps people to make new friends and speak their own language which create a comfortable atmosphere. Moreover, people who from the same background are more easy to understand each other and they may get along well than other people.
What is more, contacting with family is one of the good ways to decrease the sickness of missing hometown. People can use internet video phoning and international calling to connect with their family. It is a convenient and simple method to release people’s sickness during their stay in a different country. In addition, family’s support is always the best medicine for people who have homesick problem as family is the most closer people in the world.
In conclusion, solving the trouble of missing home while living in another country can be vary. The ideas of mine include meeting same nationality people and calling family regularly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
... have homesick problem as family is the most closer people in the world. In conclusion, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05240174672 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60833609291 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585152838428 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6158653799 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22636760801 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797980075819 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510956598874 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13704753166 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478991161898 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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