People who travel to another country to live work or study for a period of time often suffer from homesickness.
Why is this?
What are the best ways to reduce this problem?
Travel is inevitably set to play an increasingly important role in our lives. Although it encompasses a multitude of advantages, it has some disadvantages, of which feel homesick is the most apparent. Hence, a question arises why do travelers become homesick? And how to ameliorate it?
First, homesickness occurs due to several reasons. Longing for the home country is the major cause. To enumerate, when migrants move to a new country, they experience different customs and conditions, so that their perception is less likely to accept the new culture. Moreover, missing families, as well as friends, could trigger negative thoughts, which lead to feeling solitary. For example, if expatriates have a predilection for having a dinner in a restaurant, the emotions of alienation will be provoked. As a result, by staying at length of time in another country, expatriates will experience homesickness.
Second, to ameliorate this problem, several solutions can be followed. One of these ways is reducing negative thoughts. For instance, by learning the language of the designated country, the travelers will most probably blend with the local citizens, which assists them to earn new friends. Thus, favorable thoughts can be decreased, so that homesickness might be alleviated. Moreover, when people are going to another country, can learn about its culture, in order to adapt rapidly, because this contributes to relish their times there. Therefore, they are less likely to miss their country. So that their homesickness might be mitigated.
In conclusion, whilst travel embrace a wide range of benefits, its drawbacks cannot be overlooked, of which home is sickness is the most notable. Yet, learning the language of the country when travelers are staying aids them to overcome the homesickness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'having dinner'.
Suggestion: having dinner
... if expatriates have a predilection for having a dinner in a restaurant, the emotions of aliena...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... are less likely to miss their country. So that their homesickness might be mitigated. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41489361702 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03839463527 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5697187987 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3684210526 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8421052632 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157808408779 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452888178383 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457428907499 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870098423221 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273642483356 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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