A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons
The 20th Century has brought some immense changes in humans lives such as technology advancements, changes in living standards and many more. Likewise, the perceptions of judgment has also affected tremendously and people are now giving priority to somebody who has more wealth or material ownership over the traditional values. I also agree this statement and will provide the reasons and illustrations to support my opinion.
First of all, people nowadays are calling themselves more sensible than the old generation because they think twice before taking any decision. For instance, in the past relations were built up on pure love, affection and attraction. These old school people used to spent their entire life based on these assumptions. However, the current era people do not fall for such thoughts as according to them these are the secondary concerns. The important thing that matter is to ensure if the person is well-settled or have reputed financial background regardless that how such money has been earned. They also consider to live at some place where their social status would not be compromised or have expensive outfits to show their living lifestyles. The values of feelings have been completely buried somewhere down under and almost seems impossible to restore.
To speak further, we have many examples in front of us where the famous personalities have given their whole lives for the humanity. One of the famous personality Dalai Lama who was popular because of his generous spirit and observations such as “my religion is kindness.” Likewise, the generous spirit of South African Anglican Archbishop Emeritus Desmond Tutu is reflected in the belief that we are each made for goodness. Surely kindness and goodness are the marks of a courageous life.These surely reflects the importance of preserving these values which unfortunately is now missing from this world.
To elucidate, it is a basic right of every human being to have a high standards of living and to enjoy every moment of their lives. However, these needs should not be stepped up over the traditions. We as humans are responsible to keep this humanity going at pace and must keep it alive until we breath.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider living'.
Suggestion: consider living
...w such money has been earned. They also consider to live at some place where their social status...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...ness are the marks of a courageous life.These surely reflects the importance of prese...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'standard'?
Suggestion: standard
...ght of every human being to have a high standards of living and to enjoy every moment of ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...must keep it alive until we breath.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, likewise, second, so, well, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18384401114 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76016037022 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615598885794 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5566289081 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.3125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142810564681 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411702284662 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267377515411 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765893199703 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027979042233 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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