The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extend do you agree?
Most of the people live with the mantra “prevention is better than cure” therefore, some people reckon that preventing health issues and diseases is crucial than treating them with medication and hence, the government should allocate an apt budget for it. This essay fervently agrees with the notion and reasons are explained in the consequent paragraphs.
To begin with, adequate money should be disbursed by the government to promote the prevention methods as it can encourage people to a healthy life. In other terms, this will impinge on an individual to live a healthy life and also act as a shot in the arm, to prevent him from indulging in the wrong habits such as eating junk foods or taking any kind of drugs. Nonetheless, individual efforts alone will not be able to give the desired results, hence, the government should invest in highlighting the advantage of a healthy lifestyle by launching health awareness crusades.
Furthermore, these gestures of the government towards highlighting the benefits of prevention can help people save a lot of money on medical expenses. This step will make people tell the vestige of the diseases which in turn, dampen the tendency of people to fall ill. In short, this will succor in saving money. For instance, there is a 20 percent downturn in the sale of tobacco and cigarettes in India, after the government has launched a campaign on major bus stand and railway stations and advertisement on the packet of the same highlighting the repercussion on health. This influenced people to utilize the money to save their health instead of wasting on adopting ill habits which will later need to be cured.
To conclude, I strongly agree that the higher authorities should spend more money on encouraging the prevention of the diseases as it will help people stay safe as well as save money.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in short, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00323624595 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74012774896 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4839655898 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.545454545 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197603334458 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787609238838 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294219414287 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12631270294 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239088621891 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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