As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people traveling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?
In recent decades, the tourism industry has expanded inevitably which is attributed to the internet and globalization. People use to travel around the world in order to widen their knowledge horizons which, in turn leads to increase in the number of flights and these are causing a devastating effect on the environment. This essay will discuss the problems and also suggest the solutions which can be taken to resolve it.
To begin with, firstly, the rise in the number of flights has increased the emission of carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide. The high jet at high altitude tends to produce global warming effect and the ramp-up in the air travel is like a shot in the arm in carbon gases in the atmosphere which consequently, affects the ozone layer of the earth which as a protector for the earth from ultraviolet rays which cause various skin diseases to humans. Furthermore, this has not affected the humans but also the migration of birds. Due to high traffic in the air and low visibility most of the birds get hit by the plane and which results in lowering down the number of the birds in the sky. For instance, as per the survey at the University of Melbourne, there is a 60 percent increase in the carbon gases in the atmosphere after the evolution of planes, and 52 percent of birds are hit by plane during their flight.
There are some possible solutions to this problem such as the government should impose a steep tax on the flight and improved the public road transport and railways which can handle the more amount of passengers and need to be punctual. Apart from this, the government should have awareness campaigns defining the damages which these flights have on the environment and encourage them to use the mean of transport which pollute the environment less.
To conclude, the raise in the travel has led to various problem which impacts the ecosystem of the earth by posing a threat to the ozone layer and birds. However, this can be sort by using other means of transportation system and making people aware of environmental issues caused by them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... the internet and globalization. People use to travel around the world in order to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, apart from, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7728531856 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58835770594 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506925207756 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2317060696 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.583333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0833333333 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215913855015 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791949917126 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389257569404 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136014524248 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348646773619 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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