rite about the following topic:
Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
A segment of people in society do not prefer to eat non vegetarian food because they opine that it deteriorates their health as well as also harmful for the fauna. However, I share the same opinion and I believe, deliberately killing the animals for our eating purposes without any specific need is really an ofensive act.
Primarily, consuming animal flesh and sea food bring many dangerous disease for humans. Since, there are many nations in the world that are toatlly based on animals for eating , as a result ,micro-organisms present in the body of those animal cause harmful diseases in individuals. For example, the outbreak of Swine Flu was extremely fatal for the human raceand pigs act as a carrier in spreading this in everybody. Therefore, it is clear that avoiding meat or fish products will surely protect the human lives.
Furthermore, adopting non vegetarian diet also cause devastating impact on animal species. Because of the over consumption of animals and sea food, their number start declining gradually, which further imbalance the food change and result in their depletion. For instance, a survey showed that some fish species which are rare in the world have extinct, resulting from dependency of humans on sea food. Hence, eating non vegetarian food has disastrous effect on animal species.
To conclude, unoubtedly, being vegetarian is a good approach for saving the human generation and also for other living creatures in the world. Though, meat, fishes are higly rich sources of proteins and animals ,but intentionally killing other animals for eating purpose is inhumane. Moreover, there are many new alternative foods present in the market which can fulfil the need of essential animal proteins.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21505376344 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6994684851 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4799058196 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16260050829 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614565284334 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387142371544 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107962510649 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258540686646 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.